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Paul Wilson
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25 posted 06-26-2006 07:03 AM       View Profile for Paul Wilson   Email Paul Wilson   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Paul Wilson

Serenity...While reading this I had no idea what it was about, I thought it could be about waiting in line to renew you drivers license or waiting in line for a hair cut or maybe at the doctors office or trying to get something done about your insurance claim.
I was totally confussed as how to take it, and then you bring up the warehouse thing. I give up my mind is scrambled just like the eggs at shoney's. But I must say I enyoyed this very much...Paul

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26 posted 06-26-2006 04:53 PM       View Profile for nedj   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit nedj's Home Page   View IP for nedj

Who'd a thunk that being 13th would win me such a coveted prize. So much for superstition, eh? :-) And a kiss right back to you Serenity.

A poem's just a poet in a word.

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27 posted 06-26-2006 04:59 PM       View Profile for Gentle Spirit   Email Gentle Spirit   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Gentle Spirit

Karen, not only does your writing amaze me, make me smile, and make me shake my head...YOU amaze me and make me wish I had one ounce of your spirit and strength lady.  
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28 posted 06-29-2006 05:53 AM       View Profile for latearrival   Email latearrival   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for latearrival

And after reading your "confession", our posts still stand as truth.You are even more imaginative than we knew. Well we thought we knew, but now we know.  LOL martyjo
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29 posted 06-29-2006 08:35 AM       View Profile for LeeJ   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for LeeJ

I think thoughts are the foundation for reality...

Lady, this was impressive, but then, you are always impressive, and to boot, what everyone else said before me...

You are one extremely unique woman....

hugs
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30 posted 06-29-2006 04:44 PM       View Profile for serenity blaze   Email serenity blaze   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for serenity blaze

Yanno? I think I am happiest when I take concepts and write them out as personifications. I've always done this sort of thing in my head. When I was a child, numbers and colors had gender and personality. (for example, red was always female, but for some reason, orange was male)

See? I was always weird.

Thanks for stopping in to see me.

Love to all.
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31 posted 06-30-2006 12:20 PM       View Profile for jellybeans   Email jellybeans   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for jellybeans

lolol I was gonna guess mvd...but then I read you made it up, but then...one time at mvd is enough to make you lose your mind and for sure enough to make you mail in your registration for the rest of your life...*looks around* did I just say that out loud?
great write lady......as if were that small cherub that sits on your shoulder and keeps you sane
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32 posted 06-30-2006 12:43 PM       View Profile for Serena   Email Serena   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Serena

A scene in many of our lives.
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33 posted 10-05-2007 05:20 AM       View Profile for latearrival   Email latearrival   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for latearrival

Just because I read this again and want others to do it too.  One of my favorites. "late"
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34 posted 10-05-2007 01:36 PM       View Profile for serenity blaze   Email serenity blaze   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for serenity blaze

I forgot about this one, you sneaky lovely lady!

Oh martyjo...sometimes my head is a playground, and sometimes it's a prison.



and other times, I just crack myself up...

thank you
 
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