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Danielle
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Providence, RI, USA

0 posted 2006-06-23 09:03 PM


Your hand brushes my cheek
It's 2am and you're just getting home
You've been gone so long I almost forgot how soft your touch was

I'm snuggled up under my huge comfortor
Surrounded by pillows and cluching my stuffef lion, Leo

It's summer and the air outside is heavy and hot
The cool breeze of my AC on high keeps me from melting under my blanket

As you sit at the edge of my bed next to me, your hand running up and down my back
I stir
My eyes open slightly and I smile

Knowing your here next to me I let go of Leo and toss the extra pillows to the floor
You join me under the covers

Snuggle up close
Kiss my lips so sweetly

I smile and tell you how happy I am to have you home
We wisper I love you's
And as your strong arms give me a gental squeeze I drift off to sleep in your loving arms


© Copyright 2006 Danielle Lefebvre - All Rights Reserved
JL
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since 2004-04-01
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1 posted 2006-06-23 10:53 PM


NICE!!

JL


Patricia
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2 posted 2006-06-24 05:51 PM


A sweet and romantic poem...Very lovely.

Patricia

jody5
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since 2005-12-21
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3 posted 2006-06-25 12:09 PM


A very sensual and feeling poem.  Bravo.

Huggs Kimberly


FiercestCalm
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since 2006-06-24
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michigan
4 posted 2006-06-25 12:26 PM


i have to admit, i first looked at this because we share a name : )but then i find such a lovely poem~a wonderful representation of the feeling that comes when a loved one returns.(and it fits my current mood as i wait for *my* loved one to return from  his ballgame.)

great poem!

passing shadows
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displaced
5 posted 2006-06-25 07:29 AM


very sweet
Margherita
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Eternity
6 posted 2006-06-25 10:26 AM


Beautiful the poem and beautiful you, as you have no reproaches for coming home at 2am ... Leo filled the temporary void. Fantastic!

Enjoyed this greatly!

Love,
Margherita

I Am Anonymous
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since 2006-06-26
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7 posted 2006-06-26 09:31 AM


Beautiful.
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