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0 posted 2006-06-23 03:45 PM



I'm lying
in the tub

a drip
strikes my foot

I cannot tell
if it is hot or cold

you are standing
in the doorway

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Canada eh.
1 posted 2006-06-23 03:49 PM



*smiling here*

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2 posted 2006-06-23 04:06 PM


lol I gather that you cannot discern the temperature of the water because your rapt attention is elsewhere!

Cute little vignet!

Hugs from a fellow Ontarian,

EA
Flowers

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