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JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2006-06-22 09:22 PM


Where She Wants To Be


In my mind it seems so wrong
but in her world things must be right.
My sweetheart wanted to be someplace,
so she left our place and went to
the place she'd rather be.
Now, even though my world
seems all out of place,
things are in place for her
if she's where she
wants to be.


JamesLee
22June
2006

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Kristabell
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since 2003-11-29
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1 posted 2006-06-22 09:47 PM


I suppose it is what ever makes them happiest that tends to matter most to those who are dearest to us.

Nice write,
Kristabell

ChaoticHazeLight
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since 2006-06-13
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2 posted 2006-06-22 09:49 PM


... true

Margherita
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3 posted 2006-06-23 05:09 PM


No place like the right place, if it's the same place for both hearts who seek the right place.

Otherwise ... well you know, dear James.

Love,
Margherita

JL
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since 2004-04-01
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Texas, USA
4 posted 2006-06-23 05:17 PM


"if she's where she
wants to be."

Maybe you should ask??
Enjoyed.
JL

JamesMichael
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
5 posted 2006-06-23 06:58 PM


Thank you Kristbell, Chaotic, Margherita and JL for the nice responses...
JL...she left town and disconnected her phone so I can't ask...I suppose she'll let me know if she wants me to know...meanwhile I have to do whats right for me...James

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