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passing shadows
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0 posted 2006-06-22 04:44 PM



Forever Kept

I could never write something as beautiful as you.
No picture-perfect sunset could ever do.

There's no way
to capture words to say
I love you with all.

No photographic memory
could ever recall
enough to display
what life gave us...

what time took away.



© Copyright 2006 Dixie Lee Bullington - All Rights Reserved
poettothecars
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1 posted 2006-06-22 04:47 PM


while time does not stand still, a photograph can capture life for an eternity

a poet who cares

GTP
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2 posted 2006-06-22 05:35 PM


sometimes the memories never leave...all I know is, in time, they tend to disspiate so only the good is remembered...powerful!
Enchantress
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3 posted 2006-06-22 06:12 PM


Most excellent sweet Dixie gal.
Hugs~Nancy

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain ~

Kristabell
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4 posted 2006-06-22 09:54 PM


Beautiful poem! I know.

Kristabell

SmartChick
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5 posted 2006-06-22 10:38 PM


Beautiful, Dixie!
latearrival
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6 posted 2006-06-23 04:43 AM


You have never written anything I have not loved. You Are Loved.
passing shadows
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7 posted 2006-06-23 06:39 AM


thank you each
LeeJ
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8 posted 2006-06-23 07:13 AM


this was such a pure hearted write...
JL
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9 posted 2006-06-23 05:23 PM





JL


Margherita
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10 posted 2006-06-23 05:28 PM


"Forever kept" ... gold remains gold and your heart makes it shine even if it's hidden in the past.

Nothing is lost.

I love this poem, dear Dixie, it holds all your passion and love.

Love and hugs.
Margherita


poettothecars
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11 posted 2006-07-02 08:30 PM


memories, time and love; either way we love them all

much like poetry, some days will be more of a reflection than others

or that was my own thoughts in reflecting inside those thoughts, from reading your poem, upon those passing shadows, as if it was all good

a poet who cares

rosepetals25
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12 posted 2006-07-02 09:15 PM


Very cool poem.  I liked
HopeS
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13 posted 2006-07-03 12:27 PM


Memories that time will never erase ,Dixie friend we are keepers

Hope

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