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Dark Stranger
Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2006-06-22 07:38 AM



you brought me a gift
of dark candy
and I left in on your pillow
tomorrow when I left
by the window
from your room without doors

you said goodbye too
when we first touched eyes
just so it was out of the way
if we ever needed it
and I said hello
as I was leaving

so when I returned
you would not be surprised
and find the need to wake up
from your insomnia
or make a wrong turn again
when traveling through

the lovely of your familiar

_______________

daark

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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354
Listening to every heart
1 posted 2006-06-22 09:51 AM


I sure hope it was a Dove chocolat...
it's the best.

And thank you for your best...

always a lovely day, reading you.


Startime55
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since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148
Alberta, Canada
2 posted 2006-06-22 09:54 AM


Powerfully soothing with a dreamlike quality...A delight to read...*big hugs*

Klassy Lassy
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since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187
Oregon
3 posted 2006-06-22 01:57 PM


Coming or going, the caress of familiar...  doors close, windows whisper to windsong and shadow  

The Lady
Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634
The Southwest
4 posted 2006-06-23 12:57 PM




Stranger, you should have eaten the candy.
Beautiful words as always. I am still eaten up with envy.

LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

5 posted 2006-06-23 01:05 PM


upon your return, give her a Dairy Queen, reese's peanut butter blizzard and she'll never let you go...

reminded me of "you had me at hello"  

lovely thoughts here...


Martie
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since 1999-09-21
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6 posted 2006-06-23 01:14 PM


DS

"and I said hello
as I was leaving"

Sometimes it happens that way in a room without doors.  

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