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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2006-06-22 04:20 AM


You Can't Go There


If I could take you to a place
where lost love could be replaced,
would you go there, where old love
could be renewed and new love
could be shared.

Once I loved a woman and
suddenly she wasn't there.
Hoping to renew our love,
I found there's no way there.


JamesLee
12June
2006



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Marge Tindal
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1 posted 2006-06-22 08:33 AM


OhJames~
IF there was a way ... I'm sure you'd find it~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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Earth Angel
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2 posted 2006-06-22 09:43 AM


Where there is a will ~ there is a way! That may be trite, but I do believe that it be true!

Sending you a hello (not a good-bye) aloha hug,

Linda
Flower

Startime55
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3 posted 2006-06-22 09:50 AM


I believe in true love so much that I know that any obstacles placed in its path can be remove...Don't give up, my friend....**big hugs**

Debo
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4 posted 2006-06-22 12:32 PM


Another sad and yearning write

Debo

passing shadows
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5 posted 2006-06-22 03:26 PM


plenty more fish in the sea
as people have told me

JamesMichael
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6 posted 2006-06-22 09:07 PM


Thank you Marge, Earth Angel, Startime, Debo and passing shadows for the nice responses...
As usual, it takes two...James

Klassy Lassy
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7 posted 2006-06-23 01:36 AM


Sometimes the end just means transition to a new beginning. It is not always as we would choose it, sometimes it's better.  I wish you a happy heart and rosy tomorrows and an amazing somebody to share them!

~ Klassy

JL
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8 posted 2006-06-23 05:04 PM


Oh man!  
Been there.

Nice one James.

JL


JamesMichael
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9 posted 2006-06-23 06:53 PM


Thank you Klassy Lassy and JL for the nice responses...
Yes it is a transition...James

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