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Shy Light Seeking
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Shy Light Seeking |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Shy Light Seeking To read hearts... Host most generous in review Moods like breadcrumbs trail a clue Moving unsure steps to river side...slide Casting forehand into waters still unknown Tan that travels farther than an eye can roam Should...or could I feed upon my footsteps? Perching on a rock ingrained in ribbons gold Looking over traces of assertions bold Perfumed ped explores the cranny surface stone Arch of rough now smooth my feet have known Shy...the sly of anklet rounds a shapely slope Back to center stage the views kaleidoscope Nibbling as I go, the evidence of where I've been Never to return again...and I wouldn't if I could For all of ever took me every ounce I understood That at the end, each crumb dissolved, my feet on solid ground Out looking optimistically, your trailing light I've found Copyright Kkh 6/21/06 |
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Kristabell Senior Member
since 2003-11-29
Posts 678Portland, OR |
Awww, nice write! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
how lovely this is! |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Kathleen~ I stood entranced on your doormat title - 'Shy Light Seeking' ... ... knowing that when I entered I would be treated to a word delight~ 'Perfumed ped explores the cranny surface stone Arch of rough now smooth my feet have known Shy...the sly of anklet rounds a shapely slope Back to center stage the views kaleidoscope' ... oh my .... was I ever pleased~ Thank you for being such a lovely poetess~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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GTP Junior Member
since 2006-06-18
Posts 35NC...USA |
you have created a visual masterpiece with your words...there are times I read something and wish I had written it...this is one of those times! |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Nibbling as I go, the evidence of where I've been Never to return again...and I wouldn't if I could For all of ever took me every ounce I understood That at the end, each crumb dissolved, my feet on solid ground Out looking optimistically, your trailing light I've found loved your eyes |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Your titles always draw me in ~ and then, dear poetess, you deliver the goods! An amazing write! Linda  |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
"Moods like breadcrumbs trail a clue" You have a way with words. This line is just perfect! Enjoyed the entire write, but this line is the thread For the shy light seeking. Enjoyed!! JL  |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"That at the end, each crumb dissolved, my feet on solid ground" Splendid work TD. |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
And with the final line read, I sighed with my signature ahhhh....so beautiful. I have missed reading you! Patricia |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
This is just beautiful. |
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jody5 Senior Member
since 2005-12-21
Posts 876California, U.S.A. |
Splendid Poetry, I give you a standing ovation. Huggs Kimberly |
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