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Sunshine
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Listening to every heart

0 posted 2006-06-21 10:28 PM



Listen to your heartbeat and dance…


…who would know
a little brown dove
of  chocolat
would bring some
piece of happy

to dance
dance, heart, dance

when children ask of life
and spouses ask what? and
askance asks

dance, heart, dance;

born this soul of me,
in a coldest part
of earth’s time
against all odds…
still, a heart beats,

someone close gave
a listen…

some signs spell life and oh!
life sings…
oh, God, lift…lift please,

lift them beyond hope
for hope brings

beat,
hearts beat
listen

listen to your heartbeats
and dance

>


~*~



Dedicated…
to Krystal
June 21, 2006


© Copyright 2006 Karilea Rilling Jungel - All Rights Reserved
Jess
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1 posted 2006-06-21 11:09 PM


lovely poem and picture! *chocolat* I love that word. I was pulled in by the title. And now I feel like dancing...
Kristabell
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2 posted 2006-06-21 11:13 PM


Nice, I will do that indeed!
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just out of reach
3 posted 2006-06-21 11:17 PM



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4 posted 2006-06-21 11:18 PM


great structure

i like the way the heart is addressed

nice write

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iliana
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5 posted 2006-06-22 03:48 AM


Precious!  And I loved the rhythm......jo
Martie
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6 posted 2006-06-22 11:10 AM


Sissie

"to dance
dance, heart, dance

when children ask of life"

How precious then is the rhythm!  

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7 posted 2006-06-22 11:53 AM


"…who would know
a little brown dove
of  chocolat
would bring some
piece of happy"

Smiling big time and you know why!!!  
Yup..those little brown doves sure bring on the happy times.

This is wonderful Karilea!!
Great pic...thank you for sharing.

Hugs~Nancy

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8 posted 2006-06-22 12:01 PM


This sings to me this morning!  Have been chasing cows until I'm blue in the face and glad for this refreshment!  Thanks, Sunshine.  I think I'll just 'earmark' this one!

        misce

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9 posted 2006-06-22 12:02 PM


Now earmarked!
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10 posted 2006-06-22 01:40 PM


Oh, Karilea, I am!  Thanks to your magical poem!

Miscellanea I'd LOVE to help you herd cows!

- Owl

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11 posted 2006-06-22 02:55 PM


precious!

thanks for sharing this

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12 posted 2006-06-23 12:21 PM


A beautiful picture and poem, Karilea.
LeeJ
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13 posted 2006-06-23 12:56 PM


born this soul of me,
in a coldest part
of earth’s time
against all odds…
still, a heart beats,


and this is why I curl up with all the wonderful books at PIP and read
this is a glorious dedication, inspiration full of love, love the pictures and the words...

JL
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14 posted 2006-06-23 03:53 PM


From your heart to the world!
Beautiful!!

JL


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15 posted 2006-06-23 03:59 PM


The beat of your loving heart words always makes me want to dance!

Precious pic of your pretty darlin's!

Lovely post to happen upon!

Blessings of love to all!

Linda
Flowers

Patricia
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16 posted 2006-06-23 09:27 PM


This is truly inspiring words for me.  I am so glad I went looking for you!

Love,
P

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