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Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2006-07-14 07:21 AM

mexican tomorrow
calente catering to chrome
like the honey saliva

of a sinful suggestion
on want to hear whispers
in the heatred of valley coals

sipping asphalt liquor
before the fat lip conejo
can double talk her promise

of something cooler below
where her hem is gauze damned
over a curvy camarillo

bow legged welcoming
in mist spit lacquer
from thirsty gringo sundowns

when the gatos wore metal shoes
and tin toed their noise
down the alley of old town

behind the jap man's laundry

________________

daark

scribblenote: road dog's rattle before a stogie rodeo at the corona bordello 101 northish

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2006-07-14 07:28 AM

Go ahead...
make me homesick...

Morning

DS

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

2 posted 2006-07-14 09:33 AM

DS

"when the gatos wore metal shoes
and tin toed their noise
down the alley of old town"

Do you wear poems inside....away from the hot metal of the road, just to pleasure us?

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

3 posted 2006-07-14 09:34 AM

descriptive to say the least

welcome to the weekend...

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

4 posted 2006-07-14 10:20 AM

ms sun, welcome home, or is it well come home? thanks lady friend.

___________

ms martie, thanks lil neighbor, seems you see what I see from your window?

_______________

ms leej, have a blessed weekend, a thousand times..and thank you

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

5 posted 2006-07-14 10:59 AM

taking a little ride are ya?

And so it those we live with
and should know who elude us
But we can still love them
we can love completely
without complete understanding

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

6 posted 2006-07-14 11:03 AM

lady lauren
always being dragged
by the black witch
helpless to resist her
when she begs fo me to master

thanks hon

Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

7 posted 2006-07-14 12:46 PM

Oh good you are on the road again! I loved this, simply loved it!

like the honey saliva

of a sinful suggestion
on want to hear whispers

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

8 posted 2006-07-14 01:07 PM

ms myst' thanks lady friend

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

9 posted 2006-07-14 01:40 PM

want a passenger?
I feel a case of wanderlust coming on.

have a great weekend dark.

For it was not into my ear you whispered
But into my heart..
It was not my lips you kissed
But my soul.

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

10 posted 2006-07-14 04:40 PM

ms E, sure anytime lil friend, would be blessed to have you huggin behind
thanks and have a great one too

Cloud 9
Senior Member

since 2004-11-05

Posts 980
Ca

11 posted 2006-07-14 05:07 PM

Nice..

MGROVES

Member Elite

since 2004-02-01

Posts 3802
california

12 posted 2006-07-17 01:55 AM

i wanna ride

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

13 posted 2006-07-17 08:13 PM

you aim to tease
and you do so good
mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

14 posted 2006-07-17 11:40 PM

Gotta love that fat lip conejo... gotta love this poem.

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