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Snowflake From Hell
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since 2003-07-10
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My own little Icey Oblivion

0 posted 2006-06-21 06:19 PM


I wish I could fly away,
No more reason to stay.
I'd turn around to see you one last time,
Can't fight this decaying grime.

Reach the top of the cage,
Pulled back to that fighting stage.

I wish I could fly away,
No more reason to stay.
I'd turn around to see you one last time,
Can't fight this decaying grime.

Fighting in a daze,
Smiling in a purple haze.

I wish I could fly away,
No more reason to stay.
I'd turn around to see you one last time,
Can't fight this decaying grime.

Tired of fighting when I can't win,
Surrender to the needle and pin.

I wish I could fly away,
No more reason to stay.
I'd turn around to see you one last time,
Can't fight this decaying grime.
I wish I could fly away,
No more reason to stay.
I'd turn around to see you one last time,
Can't fight this decaying grime.

Hollow heroes seperate as they run...Shadows linger in your pain dead and done

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passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
1 posted 2006-06-21 06:40 PM


I know the feeling
Lighthousebob
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since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725
California
2 posted 2006-06-21 08:31 PM



Very melodic.

From your poem I can really feel the need for escape...

...or for some serious Brillo Pad.
Enjoyed reading.

-Bob

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Member Patricius
since 2001-08-31
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just out of reach
3 posted 2006-06-21 08:39 PM


Put this to music my friend !!
hugs, Chris

Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance.
~Carl Sandburg

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