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Professor Gloom
Member Elite

since 2000-07-23

Posts 3082
of Depression

0 posted 2006-06-21 04:43 PM

"If the sun refused to shine"

Darkness,
The soothing feel of no light,
Not seeing,
Just being,
A creature of endless night.

No challenge
By those solar flaming days,
All days end.

Night's undone
By the sun;
If the sun refused to shine
The twilight
Would be bright.

I could hide everywhere
anywhere,
Without sight.

Yet reflections fill mirrors
I can see
Backwards me
That should be in the shadow.

Just my touch
Tells soo much
Of what is lingering near,
And if found
A soft sound,
Fills the space chasing off fear.

Do you fear?

What lingers
Trust what ever you want to
Be fingers,
Be your eyes,
Or the rustling going through
With small sighs.

Light a flame
Let those photons make their claim,
End darkness

Candlelight
Breaks the night
A burning mini sunshine,
Waxy flame
I did tame,
Forming shadows that are mine.

Can you see?
Can you be?

If the sun refused to shine,

For me,
It would be just fine.

Gloom

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

1 posted 2006-06-21 04:50 PM

What lingers
Trust what ever you want to
Be fingers,
Be your eyes,
Or the rustling going through
With small sighs.

Yes, the dark becomes you

M

Snowflake From Hell
Senior Member

since 2003-07-10

Posts 777
My own little Icey Oblivion

2 posted 2006-06-21 06:32 PM

everyone should be part of the dark, theyd feel more free good write

Hollow heroes seperate as they run...Shadows linger in your pain dead and done

Ratleader

Member Rara Avis

since 2003-01-23

Posts 7026
Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

3 posted 2006-06-21 11:53 PM

I don't keep many poems -- maybe one in a couplethree hundred will make it to my library.

I'm keeping this one.

The first verse alone would make it worth that, and the rest....simply exquisite. Well done.

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Kristabell
Senior Member

since 2003-11-29

Posts 678
Portland, OR

4 posted 2006-06-22 12:13 PM

Awww, cute. I am glad to hear it! Nice nice write.

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