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Open Poetry #38

The Aftermath

transparent_beauty
New Member

since 2006-06-21

Posts 4
MI, USA

0 posted 2006-06-21 12:30 PM

"The Aftermath"

walk along
the winded path
shortly following
the aftermath
deign my falty
within design
making the solitude
a thinner line
rifling through
the cemetary
of my mind
for the enmity
will subside
through the memories
that have died
emasculate the
perplex emotions
disconsolate
the bitter hope
of one last outcome
to necesstate them
to concede
that will avail me
to proceed
and dawn the adversary
to approach
deem likely their essence
will encroach
and walk along
the winded path
and the vagueness
of the aftermath

skyshine

Member Elite

since 2002-02-07

Posts 3058
Beneath the northern stars

1 posted 2006-06-21 01:49 PM

Another powerful piece! I enjoy your work.

sky

I hope someday you get the chance to live like you were dying....
~Tim McGraw

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

2 posted 2006-06-21 04:45 PM

love the style in this!

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

3 posted 2006-06-21 05:04 PM

Very much enjoyed this style..great read.
Hugs~Nancy

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain ~

Lighthousebob
Member Elite

since 2000-06-14

Posts 4725
California

4 posted 2006-06-21 05:26 PM

transparent_beauty,

Smiles. WOW! The future wasn't that far away.

You have shown a great deal of versatility between your two poems here that I can certainly appreciate.

...and I do hope that you appreciate that I appreciate, beause after reading your poem, I certainly don't want to be on your bad side.

Smiles.

Enjoyed reading.

-Bob

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

5 posted 2006-06-23 05:41 PM

Very nice write
Enjoyed.

JL

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