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FunShower
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
FunShower Summer leaves a teasing touch In beckon storm’s approach Aroused, the leaves turn upward such The plea of more to shyly broach Incipient clouds of gathered lust Prepare endowments pent As thirsty blooms in upward thrust Receive the soaking sent And dance within the falling glee Imploring sated sheen To reach the brim so thankfully Complete a shower's glean Copyright Kkh 6/21/06 [This message has been edited by ThisDiamond (06-21-2006 09:16 AM).] |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
This is a fantastic shower of beauty. Your eyes behold nature's performance and your pen shares the vision masterfully. Love, Margherita  [This message has been edited by Margherita (06-21-2006 10:38 AM).] |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
Just beautiful... Patricia |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful...let it rain! Hugs~Nancy ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
lovely delightful read |
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Lighthousebob Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725California |
Like the thirsty blooms, I too have gleaned much from your verse. I enjoyed your "Fun Shower" very much. -Bob |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
You have perfectly penned a moment that some scorn and many pray for.....Rain, a blessing to most. |
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