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Debo
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0 posted 2006-06-20 10:51 PM


Love is the light
That shines on us
So very bright.

Love is the strength
And the power of
Just being together.

Without you today
My life would be ever
So dull and lifeless.

I love the feeling
We'll share forever.

Debo

© Copyright 2006 Debra Rachelle - All Rights Reserved
Will Rhyme
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since 2006-05-22
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1 posted 2006-06-20 11:05 PM


"Love is the strength
And the power of
Just being together."


Oh...I do like this!

Will

Kimberly ann
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2 posted 2006-06-20 11:49 PM


i really liked this!! it made me smile and reminds me of someone i miss very much!!
SarBear
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3 posted 2006-06-21 11:37 PM


I like this a lot...short and sweet.
Kristabell
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4 posted 2006-06-22 12:19 PM


Oh yes, it is certainly a beautiful thing! Nice job incompasing it all!

Kristabell

dreamdc
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since 2005-11-11
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5 posted 2006-06-22 12:28 PM


"I love the feeling
We'll share forever."

Such a beautiful thought...forever is always something to strive for.
Thank you for sharing. Very beautiful

jody5
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6 posted 2006-06-22 02:38 AM


This is definately love. Bravo for this poem.

Huggs Kimberly


JamesMichael
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7 posted 2006-06-22 04:11 AM


Nice...forever is a long time...James
Debo
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8 posted 2006-06-22 12:43 PM


Forever is only the length of ones life on this earth, as I want to believe.
Thanks so much for the kindness that flows from your pens.

Debo

passing shadows
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9 posted 2006-06-22 03:30 PM


very pretty poem Debra
Earth Angel
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10 posted 2006-06-22 04:53 PM


"I love the feeling
We'll share forever."

~ So sweet, and pure, and loverly!

Warm hug 'n smile,

EA
Flowers

Debo
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11 posted 2006-06-30 01:28 AM


Thanks to all for your Very kind words

Debo

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