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themute
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since 2006-05-08
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0 posted 2006-06-20 03:51 AM



Greatness for me and my children's child
Just to feel what was coming I knew it was
And now to see this great day to unfold
A seat on a throne that seems too high
A feeling of lowness I get inside
But to see what is to be tomorrow ruins it then
So what is to be it if I’ve already been there?
I am the chosen child of the race of man
To them I am a messiah of culture
Yet to myself I am much less and yet
How do I see the rain that is falling?
Is it different to me, oh yes my friend
I see it all most odd and different
With great thought and feeling
I see without end and wish to forget
Memories are the enigma
Let me forget them all and live now
Confused so much to die
To not know a thing at all
And stay there once I fall
Till one day like another me inside
Pushes to get up and stand a wile
This seems so long eternity
But it was but as fast as naturally
So would be the life I live
Without the bricks of memories
There are two of us
One robotic and the other a ghost
The machine knows what it must do to live
The ghost is what observes and understands
And so without my memories I’d live
With out the ghost is what I’d be
And so my world is changed to me
To live by only what I feel
And die without a memory
These ghosts and shells are so overrated
They can live without each other
But to build each other strong
They must live together long
And when the robot dies
The ghost will still survive
So is said by many men and so is thought by me
For I as you and all others do, I fear the end is true
So shall the great corner be turned, it is coming soon
No clue were it leads as the building blocks its way
So say that you will prepare in this life for the next
That corner is so rough there can’t be preparation
For we know not the rules of that road so turned
It is one that not the wisest can foresee
Yet hearing things, that people die and live
They tell a story that they their body see
And after often that man forgives
All men that hurt or trespass for he knows
That all that glitters is not gold
And in this realm that has been foretold
They say that they cannot grow old
And last out time that not will tell
But I can tell and so I shall
The world is confusing
So it is to all who live
Enlightened ones too
Are fools to doom
So I was chosen
To tell all of you



© Copyright 2006 Matthew Patrick Holbert - All Rights Reserved
LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
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1 posted 2006-06-20 07:18 AM


whew, very very deeply written...
this is heart and soul on paper...
well done

Midnitesun
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Gaia
2 posted 2006-06-20 01:23 PM


c'mere for a mourning hug
~grin~ well writ!
and I fear that corner is close
but don't really believe
there is anything else
beyond those clouds
except a mass of energy
recycling itself

not a heaven, not a hell
unless hell be one's
inability to get
recycled...
hmmm
see what ya did to me brain today? LOL

Frank W. Torres
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since 2006-06-10
Posts 133

3 posted 2006-06-20 01:41 PM


Nice depth.
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