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the way things are |
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Foxyoasis Senior Member
since 2003-06-10
Posts 974Atlantic Beach,Fla 
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i take myself and pick me up to set me down in your warm heart. all the magic has died down after all the clowns demask its you,who everlusted for the one thing unholy. the rain beats on my skin like a fury of storms i take my hands and i place them on the ouja board and ask for a helping hand instead i just get screwd by uncle sam bills bills and more bleed me dry of what i don't have guys do so why should anyone else be any different. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
brutally honest write, feelings so vivid, so plausible... this was brilliant.... enjoyed mucho much....  |
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Frank W. Torres Member
since 2006-06-10
Posts 133 |
Well said. Enjoyed. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
yep |
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