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scorpio
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0 posted 2006-06-19 07:16 PM



Charged

Positively charged
Fingers touching soft on skin
Filling air with sparks.

believe in what your heart feels...

© Copyright 2006 MD - All Rights Reserved
Frank W. Torres
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1 posted 2006-06-19 07:19 PM


Get down!
jody5
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2 posted 2006-06-19 07:26 PM


excellent visual picture.

Huggs Kimberly


JL
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3 posted 2006-06-19 07:40 PM


I read this over and over again.

You could put any line first
And it portrays the same visual, exactly.
No matter how it is mixed.

Nice write!

JL



scorpio
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4 posted 2006-06-19 08:03 PM


Thank you Frank.

Your kindness is appreciated Jody.

Thank you for your comments JL.

believe in what your heart feels...

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5 posted 2006-06-19 10:11 PM


reading
with hairs standing
at attention

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6 posted 2006-06-19 10:13 PM


Hello Scorpio...
It's been awhile since you've posted and I love this one.
It is positively charged with passion.
Good to read you again.
YOU and your words have been missed.
~Hugs and luv ya, Tinker~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain ~

scorpio
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7 posted 2006-06-19 10:17 PM


Thank you Kacy.  I'm glad you liked it.

Tinker thank you for your wonderful support.  It's been a while.  But I was inspired today. I'll try to keep my muse working.

believe in what your heart feels...

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8 posted 2006-06-19 10:23 PM


Ooooh, I really like this one scorpio !!
More please.
hugs, Chris

Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance.
~Carl Sandburg

scorpio
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9 posted 2006-06-20 07:08 AM


Thank you Chris.  I appreciate your kind support.

believe in what your heart feels...

Enchantress
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10 posted 2006-06-20 11:09 AM


..just because..
scorpio
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11 posted 2006-06-20 02:29 PM


Thank you Tinker.  Because is a great reason!

believe in what your heart feels...

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12 posted 2006-06-20 05:33 PM


Oooo! Shiver me timbers! I love positively charged fingers touching my soft skin! Just thinking about it is filling the air around me with sparks!!!

Thanx! I needed that! Flirty 2



Linda
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13 posted 2006-06-20 05:43 PM


been there...miss it
scorpio
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14 posted 2006-06-20 09:00 PM


Thank you Linda.  Glad I could help.

And Passing Shadows I do hope it happens again soon for you.

believe in what your heart feels...

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