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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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ghosts of swallows cellophane wings on water with river flight dominion spin the webs of odin with blunt fingers strum let the harp be a bow's hum and the clatter of arrows be stone gallant solos speechless but alive hollow let the dawn crave her pretensions when her horizon is limb with shushless fingers at the smile side of her mouth _________________ daark |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Beautiful, DS!!  |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
I agree with Martie!! believe in what your heart feels... |
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Frank W. Torres Member
since 2006-06-10
Posts 133 |
Great. |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
Lovely. |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
Layered like a symphony, daark, the melodies of shushless fingers, but I'm speechless on far horizons. Awesome poetry. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
wishing her not only happiness, but memories to abound...this was lovely and took me back in time, to a place less populated, more meaningful...with great forests, open valleys, clean vibrant fresh air...and oh, I could go on and on... first read of the morning certainly gifts a smile feeling, think I'll write a morning poem...which you have inspired.... thank you and have a great day [This message has been edited by LeeJ (06-20-2006 07:00 AM).] |
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