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Jack Straw
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since 2006-03-02
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0 posted 2006-06-19 02:48 PM



Into me I yearn to see
into you I yearn to be
lingering.
peacefully, truthfully
constructively.
becoming we, let’s learn to be
live, love, free
Intimacy

Growing together,
loving,
every shortcoming
and every virtue,
I live for you

I hope that you too
yearn to reside
within the confines of my mind
searching for truth
in a lonely world
of lies and I

Lonely world of I
why oh why?
socialized?
capitalized?
break down the walls
leaving only me and you
We, us, you, me, one, all
equally

Truth hurts
Truth heals
Truth births
souls feel
risen today
in newfound light
honestly appreciating
every life

In life we’ve found ease
In us we’ve found peace
In all I’ve found we
Intimacy beckons
What a tease.

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Startime55
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1 posted 2006-06-19 03:06 PM


Becoming one in every sense of the word...well said...

Jack Straw
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since 2006-03-02
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2 posted 2006-06-20 12:41 PM


thanks for your comment star
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