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Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2006-06-19 07:22 AM



those things we do
when you carry ballons
and a smile that laughs
out louder than your eyes

and I bring the buckets
and the slow water
just in case you want to
hold me down and drown me

I write on your skin then
my penmanship is bad
and you say I am real bad
all the way through

but you like my pen
something about how it fits
your hands and you could write
new words if I let you

use it whenever you wanted to


___________________________

daark

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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354
Listening to every heart
1 posted 2006-06-19 07:41 AM



Well dang it...
let her!



A duet
would be
wonderful!




Dark Stranger
Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast
2 posted 2006-06-19 07:45 AM


ms sun...thank you dear one..duet?  nah..would get in trouble..
LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

3 posted 2006-06-19 10:30 AM


as always, visions that rock the world of the reader...tremendous, and it looks as if you and I are both on the same wave length this morn


morning D

Martie
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since 1999-09-21
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4 posted 2006-06-19 01:01 PM


DS

I am floating air ribald comfort blood aware
a song in tune of effortless
my fingers graceful glee no less
All stress is floating balloons in flight

There is something about balloons!  

The Lady
Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634
The Southwest
5 posted 2006-06-21 04:08 PM



I love balloons Stranger. They bring freedom to do what you like without restraint.

"but you like my pen
something about how it fits
your hands and you could write
new words if I let you"

I hope she writes many new words for you.


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