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Snowflake From Hell
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since 2003-07-10
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My own little Icey Oblivion

0 posted 2006-06-18 10:48 PM


Your words to me just a whisper in sand,
Never will I get to hold your hand.
Always moving forward backwards with closed eyes,
Tired of listening to all these silent sighs.
Child came to be,
Will not let me see.
Never again shall I fall victim to this abyss,
Abyss that passes ignorance for bliss.
Take this hole in my chest,
Lay my soul to rest.
Funny how things turn out,
Set my mind in doubt.

Hollow heroes seperate as they run...Shadows linger in your pain dead and done

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aziza
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since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995
Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy!
1 posted 2006-07-14 03:14 AM


Your words to me just a whisper in sand,
Never will I get to hold your hand.
Always moving forward backwards with closed eyes,
Tired of listening to all these silent sighs.


This a beautiful poem -- I like it a lot.

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
2 posted 2006-07-14 08:40 AM


funny how things turn out

yeah

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