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Open Poetry #38

I saw a liar's Underwear

Will Rhyme
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since 2006-05-22

Posts 149

0 posted 2006-06-17 10:55 PM

I saw a liar's underwear
flapping on my line...
testaphying neighbor's
late night
witching wine.

No wind to hide the tale of scorn
from the night before.
His drawers just hung there gloriously
on morning's sunbeam shore!

The front was facing toward me;
in deed of nature raw...
the rear of them, thank Goodness,
he plucked, before I saw.

Jess
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since 2006-06-06

Posts 243
Washington

1 posted 2006-06-17 11:35 PM

hehe this was funny! I liked this a lot~!

Will Rhyme
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since 2006-05-22

Posts 149

2 posted 2006-06-17 11:41 PM

Thank You Jess,

Will

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

3 posted 2006-06-18 12:04 PM

Frank W. Torres
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since 2006-06-10

Posts 133

4 posted 2006-06-18 08:54 AM

Not Bad.

Klassy Lassy
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since 2005-06-28

Posts 2187
Oregon

5 posted 2006-06-18 03:49 PM

I guess sometimes ya just gotta let it all hang out--at least when the truth rises to the occasion. LOL

Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

6 posted 2006-06-18 06:07 PM

Well, at least there aren't any holes in
them... You write some really neat lines,
enjoyable.

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