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Enchantress
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0 posted 2006-06-17 01:10 PM



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A loving father
Entertainer of the young
Magic was his life
Two daughters looked on with pride
Dad we shall never forget.


~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~


You always told us...
Great magicians never die
They just disappear...
Your magic lives on and on.
Memories are forever.

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~Missing you Dad, Nancy Lee & Chrislane~

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© Copyright 2006 Nancy Lee - All Rights Reserved
Frank W. Torres
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1 posted 2006-06-17 01:27 PM


Thats Nice.
skyshine
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2 posted 2006-06-17 01:33 PM


That's beautiful, Nancy.

~sky

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scorpio
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3 posted 2006-06-17 02:00 PM


Tinker what a wonderful tribute.  Your Dad lives in you and sister.  Those beautiful memories are his gift to you.

believe in what your heart feels...

Magnus
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4 posted 2006-06-17 02:19 PM


Dads can be great,  mediocre and sometimes
terrible individuals...  You were blessed
by having a father that you shall always
remember and never forget.....I had one as
well....

Nelo
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5 posted 2006-06-17 03:05 PM


This is beautiful. Almost makes me wish I was closer with my poppa. Thanks for the comment on my first post also, I didn't expect so many or even so much positive feedback.
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6 posted 2006-06-17 03:23 PM


SweetEnchantedOne~
I know those lovely memories too~
How precious this is~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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poettothecars
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7 posted 2006-06-17 04:29 PM


this one is all heart and quite touching

true poetry

a poet who cares

passing shadows
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8 posted 2006-06-17 05:24 PM


lovely dedication
Sunshine
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9 posted 2006-06-17 06:02 PM



It is nice to see this again,
this Father's Day.

It's a very special poem
from two very special daughters.




JamesMichael
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10 posted 2006-06-17 09:08 PM


Lovely...its nice to have nice memories tucked away...James
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11 posted 2006-06-17 10:15 PM


That's a nice dedication to your dad Nancy.It seems very memorable and honorable.

~Jill

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Jess
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12 posted 2006-06-17 11:39 PM


beautiful. Especially the part about how "great magicians never die, they just disappear." That part got to me.
Enchantress
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13 posted 2006-06-18 08:57 AM


~Thanks so much for your replies everyone~

Happy Father's day to all the Dad's out there.

Margherita
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14 posted 2006-06-18 11:29 AM


Dear Nancy, this is really wonderful. Love spills from your hearts and ... being a Magician, your dear Father dances on in your hearts.

Love and hugs.
Margherita

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15 posted 2006-06-18 01:52 PM


Happy Dad's Day to all of the fathers out there!


Lighthousebob
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16 posted 2006-06-18 09:57 PM


Enchantress,

I love your Father's quote...

quote:
Great magicians never die
They just disappear...


What most magical promise does this hold in the hearts of loved ones who anxiously await His and his reappearing.

Thank you for sharing and thank you for your Happy Father's Day wishes.

God bless.

-Bob

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17 posted 2006-06-18 10:25 PM


His magic lives on in you Nancy and that's a good thing. Your dad looks like a young Paul Newman. :-)
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18 posted 2006-06-18 10:28 PM


A tribute that would bring tears to the eyes of any dad.
Love emanates from each line.
A beauty.

JL

SmartChick
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19 posted 2006-06-18 11:08 PM


Awwww, this is beautiful, but sad.
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20 posted 2006-06-19 04:13 PM




(wipes tear of warmth) Oh Nancy, this is soooooooo beautiful it made me tear up, dearest friend, as I can feel just how your loving, wonderful dad has inspired and influenced you and Chris's life in sooooooo many ways! (smiles) My wonderful dad, being the active, energetic Aries he is, LOL, wanted to just go on a nice long walk on the beach for Fathers Day, then head over to a conveyor-sushi bar for an early dinner, yay! (sigh) I know your father will forever smile from above as you continue to share the magic to all the world, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Nancy, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"If we have no peace, it is because we have forgotten that we belong to each other"

Mother Teresa

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21 posted 2006-06-28 01:03 PM


Very nice Nancy - Paul
kayjay
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22 posted 2006-07-04 09:01 AM


Magician is a role any father would love to play for his daughters.  Great job!  Hugs, Ken

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The yawn of a dawn will hasten the light

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