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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
flickering shadows darken blue pool reflections, sing a deep-water woman song etch caverns neath bone and the drip of day's distant call to arms she listens her melodies canted, conceived on the whispering winds of night ~ Klassy Lassy (Song of Nicolette, a lovely poet from So. Africa) [This message has been edited by Klassy Lassy (06-17-2006 11:35 AM).] |
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jody5 Senior Member
since 2005-12-21
Posts 876California, U.S.A. |
That draws a really nice autograph of the woman you are. I thought it was beautiful and deserves a standing ovation. Huggs Kimberly |
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Will Rhyme Member
since 2006-05-22
Posts 149 |
"he listens her melodies canted, conceived on the whispering winds of night" Love this!!! Will |
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StevenS Senior Member
since 2005-09-21
Posts 945L. A. (Lower Alabama) |
A beautiful song from a beautiful heart Klassy! :-) |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
Jody, what a sweet thing to say! I need to add a post script to this poem. It was written as a tribute to Nicolette, a poet friend who touches me deeply. I am delighted you like it.  Klassy |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
Will Rhyme, I think he must listen, too, to the pebbles dropped within her depths of spirit. Thank you. ~ Klassy  |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
 Steven...I love your ever widening circles. You, too, know deep waters.Always, K. |
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Jess Member
since 2006-06-06
Posts 243Washington |
beautiful from start to finish. Enjoyed this, Klassy |
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Will Rhyme Member
since 2006-05-22
Posts 149 |
I listen to my heart...and...to the beat that it finds... and... it seems to beat in rhythm to your words. Will |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
what a beautiful song! |
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Frank W. Torres Member
since 2006-06-10
Posts 133 |
I have this thing about flickering shadows. Long story. Liked it. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: Intensely beautiful! Love, Margherita |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
KlassyLassy~ 'deep-water woman song' I just LOVE that thought~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
Jess, thank you for taking time to share my poem! Will: you read it twice! I am so flattered. I love it when I can keep pace with a kindred heart! |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
Midnitesun: my pleasure to share her melodies! Frank, will we get the pleasure to read your story of flickering shadows? I am sure you now have an audience!  |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
Margherita: It's so nice when you can see her beauty, too!  Marge, special lady, thank you for your special thoughts. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wow! I love this Klassy |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
Dixie! lovely to have you back! |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Nice, such mystery that ties in with the character of the poem...a beautiful write! |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Oh, Klassy Lassy, these enigmatic depths of secret hues sing soul mysteries so softly that I am almost wondering whether I am hearing them or whether it is just a very beautiful dream. I am very proud that Nicolette comes from the same country as I do. Does she post on Pip? - Owl |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
Thank you, Barry. It's good I caught some of her essence. So glad you caught this one! Klassy |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
Owl, I have felt that way reading her poems. Thank you for taking time to share your thoughts with me. She would love your remarks and warmth. I know I do.  ~Klassy |
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