When The Wind Is Gentle - pipTalk Forums

How to Join	Member's Area	Private Library	Search	Sanctuary		Login
Main Forums	Discussion	Tech Talk	Mature Content	Archives	A home without a wall, Our haven without ends, A circle we all call Our Family of Friends!

icebox
Member Elite

since 2003-05-03

Posts 4383
in the shadows

0 posted 2006-06-16 11:38 PM

.

a soft breeze relief

belies its endless travels

from time’s beginning

©2006 by icebox

.

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

1 posted 2006-06-17 12:04 PM

wafting winds aloft
lift me into a time warp
infinity rules

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

2 posted 2006-06-17 12:27 PM

Once again! Barvo, Mr. C.....and brava, Kacy.

....jo

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

3 posted 2006-06-17 08:43 AM

Beautiful!
Well done!

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain ~

Frank W. Torres
Member

since 2006-06-10

Posts 133

4 posted 2006-06-17 09:48 AM

Extream once again.

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

5 posted 2006-06-17 10:14 AM

Thanks icebox

I remember a time in sand foot bare
hot clothed skin
to toe dig
found the cool

Somehow
my youth knew there were places
barely needing me to move at all
to travel far

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

6 posted 2006-06-17 05:34 PM

wonderful!!

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

7 posted 2006-06-17 08:04 PM

excellent, makes me think about that breeze
and where it started...kind of like a wave
that begins hundreds of miles away before it
washes ashore on some unknown beach.

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

8 posted 2006-06-18 12:01 PM

Beautiful!

I inhale your scent
as the divine breeze of life
Love is born anew

Love,
Margherita

Ratleader

Member Rara Avis

since 2003-01-23

Posts 7026
Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

9 posted 2006-06-22 12:19 PM

When wind blows gentle,

beware of the illusion;

that wind merely waits.

Clawing at the backs of leaves,

where is the gentle wind, then?

~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº>
______________Ratleader______________

jody5
Senior Member

since 2005-12-21

Posts 876
California, U.S.A.

10 posted 2006-06-22 02:58 AM

I want that wind to capture me and take me prisoner. That was a wonderful poem and I give it a standing ovation.

Huggs Kimberly

Kristabell
Senior Member

since 2003-11-29

Posts 678
Portland, OR

11 posted 2006-06-22 03:02 AM

This is so true...

Nice write,
Kristabell

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

12 posted 2006-06-22 10:03 AM

For this lovely, timeles, thought-provoking piece of writing, I am sending an Irish blessing of a soft wind blowing gently on your back.

May your travels in life be unencumbered.

Love & Light & a hug!

EA

Startime55
Member Elite

since 2003-04-05

Posts 2148
Alberta, Canada

13 posted 2006-06-22 10:06 AM

So few words that you use to leave behind such a refreshing feeling...Well done...I like it alot...*big hugs*

CastleGuard
Senior Member

since 2003-04-30

Posts 760
Alberta, Canada

14 posted 2006-06-22 11:33 AM

...as a single heartbeat of life
unreveals its eternal echo
among the patient stars...

Nicely done, icebox.

CG

	⇧ top of page ⇧
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.