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Thomas119gold
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since 2002-06-03
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Biloxi, MS (city by the sea)

0 posted 2006-06-16 07:31 PM


I drown deep in a shallow pool of lies

Love should set free not be the one that binds

my hands are tied

God knows I tried

But the depth grows as each drop cried

Lands in my pool of solitude

The puddle ripples of deceit what am I to conclude

My trust escapes in the bubbles floating to the top

Will it one day just stop

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Past thoughts in self reflection

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nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
1 posted 2006-06-16 09:46 PM


But the depth grows as each drop cried

Lands in my pool of solitude

love those lines..gotta watch it or I may be reinspired
M

Midnitesun
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Gaia
2 posted 2006-06-16 10:04 PM


oh, I hear heart and soul
crying out in this write
~hugs~
good to read you again

passing shadows
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displaced
3 posted 2006-06-17 04:40 PM


understood*
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