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poettothecars
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0 posted 2006-06-16 06:16 PM


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Charm on Trial

04 December 2005


When I try to hard
things go all wrong
Then I can link up words
in a way - from a mouth in breath
to sing out in that of spontaneous song

So comes this haunting from within
and that my dear was true
I do not need to try at all
because these words flow
and were composed in beauty of you

If I thought of love
from my mouth that would speak
While it may not be love
you really want or seek

For can eyes truly be blind
for that of a window a world away
These places stretched from end to end
that are so not the same as to a different day


“That the trial of your faith, being much more precious than of gold
that perisheth, though it be tried with fire, might be found unto
praise and honour and glory at the appearing of Jesus Christ:”
1 Peter 1: 7 KJV
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© Copyright 2006 Christopher W Herbert - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2006-06-16 07:08 PM


Very nicely penned indeed.
Hugs~Nancy

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dancing with you in the summer rain ~

Lighthousebob
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2 posted 2006-06-16 07:14 PM


It's so true that Love flows naturally.

Enjoyed reading.

-Bob

poettothecars
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3 posted 2006-06-18 07:40 AM


some times even being on pip feels like I try too hard here as well

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4 posted 2006-06-18 11:38 AM


Christopher~
One can never 'try too hard' ... Honest Injun !

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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