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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2006-06-16 02:58 PM





~Just in loving memory of someone too special to ever be forgotten~


~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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latearrival
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1 posted 2006-06-16 04:30 PM


very touching Marge,
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2 posted 2006-06-16 05:13 PM


Heartfelt.


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3 posted 2006-06-16 05:25 PM


wow
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4 posted 2006-06-16 05:49 PM


I throughly enjoyed this poem Marge It reminded me of last year when I lost Jody.  I appreciated the write.
Huggs Kim


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5 posted 2006-06-16 06:16 PM


Marge,

I echo Dixie here.... wow.

What a beautiful presentation and beautifully penned poem to accompany it. "Death Is But A Shadow...."  

Again, WOW!

-Bob

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7 posted 2006-06-16 07:22 PM


great write and superb graphics..ties in
very nicely.

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8 posted 2006-06-16 07:41 PM


Marge...This masterpiece will remain a part of me forever. Sad but beautiful.I believe this is the best from you ever..Paul

~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~
Paul

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9 posted 2006-06-16 07:59 PM


Marge/sis....so touched and touching and true.  
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10 posted 2006-06-17 05:00 AM


From the heart...very touching.
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11 posted 2006-06-17 01:40 PM


So sad....and so true. At least the memories keep. but that's not the same....

~sky

I hope someday you get the chance to live like you were dying....
~Tim McGraw

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12 posted 2006-06-18 08:44 AM



I so appreciate the kind comments on this piece~
Thank you all~

I'm weary of death's claim on those I love~
*sigh*

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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13 posted 2006-06-18 07:11 PM


Hi Marge ... I can't begin to tell you the bucket of tears brought on by your beautiful poem. I lost my Mom on May 1st and guess I needed another good cry.

You touched my heart and soul with this.

Love ya, Marti

To the world YOU may be one person, but to God you are the world!

Marge Tindal
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14 posted 2006-06-18 08:02 PM


SweetestMarti~
Awww ... take this *HUG*
and squeeze yourself really tight~
I love you and am so very sorry to hear about your mom~

*sigh* ... I AM weary of death's claim on loved ones of those I love too~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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15 posted 2006-06-19 09:36 PM


Marge, this is so beautiful.
Marge Tindal
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16 posted 2006-06-20 03:44 PM



Thank you for coming in for a read, SusieQ~

I so appreciate you~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
Email -       noles1@totcon.com     

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