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Alchemy Hour |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
Alchemy Hour By: Noah Eaton 6/15/06 * Woahhhhhh, salty sister, dawn patrol is beckonin’, what’d you say we go shreddin’ the gnarl? (Ahhhhhh, that’d be epic, but, all I got is this Woody Parsnip, and I don’t want to look all Squarepants Spongekook!) Awww shibby! No worries, ya crippler chick, today’s too coolaphonic to get chode burn! Here, borrow my grom board, I’m kinduva necter canvas commando myself! (Really? Wow, this is Gnarmax!) Righteous, let’s hit the fall line, beach bunny, alchemy hour awaits... . . . . . I’ve gotten all proned out, chasing the mare’s tail upon the glory trail, I’m a fresh gale on the third rail, that’s never ready to flail, I’m a pastrami of a swami, all soaked and I’m stoked, nothin’ like an expression session, to invoke that ancillary stroke… I should have worn my rashie today, cause I’m totally Burnt Reynolds, the summer sun’s blazin’ white gold, the Nectar of the Gods is drippin’ uncontrolled, some say I possess some fourth power, rippin’ lips in these rainbow showers, and I tell my crew it’s all about attitude, cuz this is a magic moment we call, alchemy hour… . . . I behave like a stavewave, engraved to the ragin’ riptide, babelinis think I’m a hoot in my spring suit, while quantum leapin’ the pipeline, I’ve been over the falls, I make them look notorious, shreddin’ through Orbitsville, into downtown Flushopolis. I should have worn my rashie today, cause I’m totally Burnt Reynolds, the summer sun’s blazin’ white gold, the Nectar of the Gods is drippin’ uncontrolled, some say I possess some fourth power, rippin’ lips in these rainbow showers, and I tell my crew it’s all about attitude, cuz this is a magic moment we call, alchemy hour… . . . . . Come on in, lil’ dally, forehand through this oceanic rift valley, eskimo rollin’ and cajolin’, through this tubular skittle alley, the soul kiss of the solstice, is my kind of sabbatical, inside the pope’s living room, born a church of the open sky fanatical. I should have worn my rashie today, cause I’m totally Burnt Reynolds, the summer sun’s blazin’ white gold, the Nectar of the Gods is drippin’ uncontrolled, some say I possess some fourth power, rippin’ lips in these rainbow showers, and I tell my crew it’s all about attitude, cuz this is a magic moment we call, alchemy hour… . . . (Thanks a zipload, that was haggard!) Hey, ciara, wanna head over to the Thursday Night Surf Club, and catch some grub? (Wow, dat’s da mamie, Gandelf!) "If we have no peace, it is because we have forgotten that we belong to each other" Mother Teresa |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
I should have worn my rashie today, cause I’m totally Burnt Reynolds, the summer sun’s blazin’ white gold, the Nectar of the Gods is drippin’ uncontrolled, some say I possess some fourth power, rippin’ lips in these rainbow showers, and I tell my crew it’s all about attitude, cuz this is a magic moment we call, alchemy hour… as always Noah, exception writing and a joy to read... thank you for sharing...hope all is going well with you... |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
For some reason Noah, your words always make me want to dance!! You have an amazing mind, colourful vision. Hugs, Chris  |
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Lighthousebob Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725California |
Noah, The dialect, I'm not too sure, I found it quite unique… I am afraid to talk like that With words I cannot speak. I think an hour of this, perhaps Might be too much for me But, I thank you, Noah, anyway For this lesson on Alchemy. Smiles. Your poem reminded me of Hawaii. Not that I heard anyone talking like that over there, but, because of the sun, the beach, the sand, the surf, the surf boards, the culture, and everything else. Your poem gave me a nice reflection and a mental vacation. Thanks for sharing it. -Bob |
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Frank W. Torres Member
since 2006-06-10
Posts 133 |
Your poem rocked me. Really it flows and reading it rolls. Nice poem. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Noah you rock! This is gnarly dude! (is that right??) Yup..it makes ya wanna dance! Hugs~your sidekick. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
the summer sun’s blazin’ white gold, the Nectar of the Gods is drippin’ uncontrolled, some say I possess some fourth power, You possess power there is no doubt, dear Noah! Even without understanding every word, this was a treat! And I agree, this makes me want to dance too! The accompanyment isn't bad actually: I am listening to Zucchero Fornaciari "Con le mani" ... Love and hugs. Margherita |
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