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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 2006-06-15 08:03 PM


Rewrite


Unique fruit of kind
Ego's cornucopia
Ripens in the mind

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Midnitesun
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1 posted 2006-06-15 08:08 PM


well writ
Enchantress
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Canada eh.
2 posted 2006-06-15 08:25 PM


Most excellent Sy!
I've been waiting all day for you.
Hugs & Smiles, Nancy

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3 posted 2006-06-15 08:54 PM


Now, that is certainly a well stated
remark!

Honeybee
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4 posted 2006-06-15 08:59 PM



Very well said - wise indeed

Melissa~

Intellectually I know that Canada is no better than any other country. Emotionally I KNOW that Canada is the best country in the world!

Lighthousebob
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5 posted 2006-06-15 09:24 PM


Honk! Honk!

I'm honking the horn of plenty (cornucopia) in agreement here.

Good job.

-Bob

Seymour Tabin
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6 posted 2006-06-15 09:40 PM


Midnitesun
Thank you dear.

Nancy
Had some errands to do.

Magnus
Thank you my friend.

Honeybee
Thank you sweety.

Bob
Appreciate your comment.

XOx Uriah xOX
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7 posted 2006-06-15 10:32 PM


::smiles::  
Where else could it be?   LOL
Excellent write !   As always.

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8 posted 2006-06-15 10:43 PM


~ wonderful ~
hugs, Chris

Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance.
~Carl Sandburg

Seymour Tabin
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9 posted 2006-06-15 11:09 PM


Uriah
Yes where else would it be?

Chris
Thank you dear.

scorpio
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right...there
10 posted 2006-06-16 08:45 AM


This is wonderful Sy!!

believe in what your heart feels...

Seymour Tabin
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11 posted 2006-06-16 08:55 AM


scorpio
Thank you for the read and comment my friend.

Klassy Lassy
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12 posted 2006-06-16 09:30 AM


The fruit does not fall far from the tree.  In this case, the Tree of Life?   Indeed, be blessed!     ~ Klassy  
Seymour Tabin
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13 posted 2006-06-16 09:33 AM


Klassy Lassy
A very sweet comment, thank you dear.

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14 posted 2006-06-16 01:30 PM




Good one!!

JL


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Beneath the northern stars
15 posted 2006-06-16 01:54 PM


I love the ripenings....well done!

~sky

I hope someday you get the chance to live like you were dying....
~Tim McGraw

Seymour Tabin
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16 posted 2006-06-16 02:43 PM


JL
Thank you so much.

skyshine
Thank you for the well done.

passing shadows
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17 posted 2006-06-16 04:40 PM


ooooooooo
the haiku certainly looks good on you!

Seymour Tabin
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18 posted 2006-06-16 04:52 PM


passing,
You really think so?

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