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poettothecars
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since 2006-02-10
Posts 1093
New Zealand

0 posted 2006-06-15 03:44 PM


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Do I Belong?

03 July 2005


The question was
did this poet belong
Or was there other
reason to be

Of that over
forum of words
In Pacific to
that of sea

An ocean
an emotion
Across a divide of
distance made
This servant in Christ
majored in praise

Did this Poet belong
in capital form
More to that -
what was quest to norm
To be read - to give - to share
those lessons on plain to bare


“While I live will I praise the LORD: I will sing
praises unto my God while I have any being.”
Psalms 146: 2 KJV
a poet who cares

© Copyright 2006 Christopher W Herbert - All Rights Reserved
poettothecars
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since 2006-02-10
Posts 1093
New Zealand
1 posted 2006-06-16 08:18 PM


I asked this question, because at times I feel worthless in ways of contributing to this site.

a poet who cares

jody5
Senior Member
since 2005-12-21
Posts 876
California, U.S.A.
2 posted 2006-06-19 04:39 AM


That was absolutely beautiful.  I liked it and praise God for your are.

Huggs Kimberly

poettothecars
Senior Member
since 2006-02-10
Posts 1093
New Zealand
3 posted 2006-06-19 04:43 AM


Thank you for your kindness

a poet who cares

ChaoticHazeLight
Member
since 2006-06-13
Posts 71
California, U.S.
4 posted 2006-06-19 04:55 AM


You made me think...
Think about that and you will see
how connected human beings be (couldn't help it. I wanted to rhyme lol)
In this place
I think we grow
Sharing thoughts with like minds of love
(Which is what most of the people contribute to this site.. along with heartache)
We experience the human condition together
at depths that most people nowadays overlook

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