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LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

0 posted 2006-06-15 01:39 PM

dimensions

Silver clusters…gleaming sprits
skip atop barbed cobalt peaks
of the Atlantic tide,
standing placid
welding haze
running out to sea
like an endless gauzy fabric
glistening
tranquillity,
veiled by a touch of mystery
like a
sneering mistress of clandestine
seamen

we live in that flicker
of the
undetectable sunken cheeks of time
where a wilderness
stirs fat
inconclusive
experience…
into thoughts of soul,
where notions
drive deep shadows
through cracks where
the universe
murmurs
compassionate thoughts
wearing reflective sun glasses
affording quick glances
of unconcerned wisdom
fringed with
the white crawling surf of the sea
bouncing back
where rocky cliffs
of earth delve
into the ribs
of everything…
knotting together
short and long ends of life
rhythmically
swinging
between
in
merciless folly

it is there
in that in between,
that I am
a thousand miles farther
for a moment
standing in
the wane of desire…
making a vain attempt
a very narrow ravine
of purpose which
shapes free air
and miracles
that come alive
from
the dust of bent over
horizons
lighting up everything
screeching
without
a
sound
other
then an image,
movement answers
singleness of purpose
the very essence of dreams
the epic
of one’s existence~
making it legitimate

[This message has been edited by LeeJ (06-15-2006 02:27 PM).]

Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-29

Posts 7115
South Africa

1 posted 2006-06-15 02:02 PM

"we live in that flicker
of the
undetectable sunken cheeks of time
where a wilderness stirs fat
inconclusive
experience…
into thoughts of
soul, where notions drive deep shadows
through the cracks where the universe
murmurs"

So very well said, LeeJ. Excellent writing as usual!

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

2 posted 2006-06-15 02:09 PM

Lee~

Oh my ... you make such gracious ink-pours~

'the very essence of dreams
the epic
of one’s existence~
making it’s legitimacy'

LOVE IT !!

And ... ... I beat Bill at a game of Scrabble this morning with gauzy !!!
Tee-hee-hee ... just showed him this and he's not laughing !
(go figure)

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
Email - noles1@totcon.com

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

3 posted 2006-06-15 02:15 PM

"it is there
in that in between,
that I am
a thousand miles farther
for a moment
standing in
the wane of desire…"

Beautiful write Lee J.

JL

StevenS
Senior Member

since 2005-09-21

Posts 945
L. A. (Lower Alabama)

4 posted 2006-06-15 02:36 PM

LeeJ you bleed poetic Genius with every write! :-)

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