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Midnitesun
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0 posted 2006-06-15 12:03 PM


write your heart

for if you write it
they will read

and if they read
they will feel

and if they feel
they will know

that all Life
is
precious

and if they believe it

they will
seek

Peace



© Copyright 2006 Kathleen Kacy Stafford - All Rights Reserved
CastleGuard
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1 posted 2006-06-15 12:13 PM



I pray from my heart this would happen.

CG

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2 posted 2006-06-15 12:24 PM


peace

yes

Lighthousebob
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3 posted 2006-06-15 01:43 PM


I loved the flow. A very nice slippery slope with a great cushion at the end—Peace.

-Bob

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4 posted 2006-06-15 01:58 PM


Yes, Kacy, here's to peace!  It is found "within" and I wonder how many people go there.  I myself seem to have trouble opening the door sometimes.
Marge Tindal
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5 posted 2006-06-15 02:04 PM


OhKacy~
EXACTLY !

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
Email -       noles1@totcon.com     

Debo
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6 posted 2006-06-15 02:14 PM


Yes Midnitesun this is just what I need to read today.
Thanks  

Debo

JL
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7 posted 2006-06-15 02:17 PM


"all Life
is
precious

and if they believe it

they will
seek

Peace"


Wonderful write!!
JL

LeeJ
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8 posted 2006-06-15 02:38 PM


inspirational indeed, lovely write
StevenS
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9 posted 2006-06-15 02:41 PM


Well said Midnitesun, I hope your right. What a wonderful world this could be! :-)
Midnitesun
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10 posted 2006-06-15 02:45 PM


Thanking each of you. When you speak your heart, I truly believe those who listen...
will know Peace is possible.

Larry C
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11 posted 2006-06-15 03:06 PM


Peace. (See I can behave!)

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane,
I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

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12 posted 2006-06-15 05:46 PM


This one is beautiful in its simplicity.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

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13 posted 2006-06-15 05:48 PM


Peace, respect and altruism is the only way this world CAN live ..thank you Kacy..

Goldenrose.

''As the deer pants for steams of water, so my soul pants for you O God''
Psalm 42:1

Midnitesun
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14 posted 2006-06-15 06:44 PM


Larry, Nan, Phil thank you!
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15 posted 2006-06-17 05:02 AM


beautiful...
icebox
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16 posted 2006-06-17 06:12 AM



Yes

but


don't you get frustrated

about how many lifetimes it takes?


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17 posted 2006-06-17 08:42 AM


Oh I am so glad I didn't miss this beauty!
Wonderful write Kacy.

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain ~

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18 posted 2006-06-17 09:50 AM


It is an ugly world. We do the best we can to change it. Nice poem,
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19 posted 2006-06-17 10:53 AM


Kacy, you gave me chills with this one

The Shadow in Blue
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20 posted 2006-06-17 11:36 AM


This poem needs only one word to discribe it, Divine. All I can say is that this is going into my library.
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21 posted 2006-06-17 12:01 PM


Ah...the perfect description of poetry.

Enjoyed this very much.

XOx Uriah xOX
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22 posted 2006-06-17 01:34 PM


The really cool thing that I have found concerning peace is that the "peace" most seek....is a produced peace.  It is dependant upon circumstances.  Being produced...it will always come and go.
Then there is True PEACE...  Perfect peace.  It is constant.  Pure.  Unending.  It cannot be attained, because it is always present.  It is found within that which you ARE.  It  IS  that which you ARE.   When the "ego" that thinks it is seperate from what it needs finally gets tossed around enough...it will retreat...And your true essence will be known.   Perfect Peace.
::smiles::    Please excuse my blah  blah  blah.    
Wonderful write !    As always.  :: bows ::

latearrival
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23 posted 2006-06-17 01:43 PM


One by one an army of peace keepers grow.
Oh,  if it were so! Best to you dear friend, martyjo

inkedgoddess
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24 posted 2006-06-17 06:37 PM


you are a wonderful example
of such

Midnitesun
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25 posted 2006-06-17 06:44 PM


with a smile
for my heart muse
insisted I write this
and she never lies to me

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26 posted 2006-06-17 09:00 PM


Even the little babys...waiting to be born...so one day they can read...James
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27 posted 2006-06-19 05:41 PM


Kacy

Your heart muse ...yes, she would insist on that beautiful word, peace!  

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28 posted 2006-06-19 05:49 PM


All life is precious and equally precious are the peace operators of which you are a great representant, dear Kacy.

A beautiful thought, efficiently rendered.

Love and Peace,
Margherita

Yes, Uriah, you are right!

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