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Open Poetry #38

Beauty

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2006-06-14 07:31 PM

Beauty

A smile
that only you
can give
to me.
A softness
like an angel
living within
your personality.
And my want
for your kiss
and the bliss
it would
bring to me.

JamesLee
20May
2006

poettothecars
Senior Member

since 2006-02-10

Posts 1093
New Zealand

1 posted 2006-06-15 12:53 PM

Some ways it feels unfinished, then maybe that is the effect. For in reading your poem, so many questions come to the surface.

Therefore this is a "thinkers poem", so is a healthy read and pleasant in ways expressed

a poet who cares

Pilgrimage
Member Elite

since 2001-12-04

Posts 3945
Texas, USA

2 posted 2006-06-15 05:48 PM

This is pretty and wistful at the same time. Well done.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

Lighthousebob
Member Elite

since 2000-06-14

Posts 4725
California

3 posted 2006-06-15 06:52 PM

You've described "Beauty" very well here.

-Bob

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