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Open Poetry #38

Rain Tears.

Goldenrose
Member Elite

since 2003-05-30

Posts 3665

0 posted 2006-06-14 07:47 AM

How strange when
the bells of
death toll?
Calling mourners
to the goodbye,
rain falls, as
if the world
sheds a mutual
tear in sympathy.

''As the deer pants for steams of water, so my soul pants for you O God''
Psalm 42:1

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

1 posted 2006-06-14 08:58 AM

heartfelt...sad...poignant, and very well done, so true, so true

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

2 posted 2006-06-14 09:06 AM

Very poignant write Phil.
Well done..well done indeed.
Hugs~Nancy

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain ~

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2006-06-14 10:00 AM

yes GR strange indeed
you expressed this so well

Debo
Member

since 2006-04-18

Posts 321
Texas U.S.A.

4 posted 2006-06-14 11:20 AM

So mournfully Beautiful
Great write.

Debo

XOx Uriah xOX
Senior Member

since 2006-02-11

Posts 1403
Virginia

5 posted 2006-06-14 11:30 AM

This touched me. Experiences vary... But in my life, it has rained at every funeral I have ever attended. Great write!

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

6 posted 2006-06-14 12:23 PM

Yes, it does seem that way doesn't it?
Well written and ejoyed. hugs, Chris

Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance.
~Carl Sandburg

Jess
Member

since 2006-06-06

Posts 243
Washington

7 posted 2006-06-14 02:05 PM

I've noticed that too...I guess even the sky mourns...but if thats the case, than someone must be really sad where i live; WA! Ah well.

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