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SilentShadow Junior Member
since 2006-04-20
Posts 32Fl. U.S.A. |
Ahhhh..., a fresh sheet, Now let me think, There's alot of room for my pen, and ink, Now what was that verse I was thinking of? It fit so nice, Like a hand in glove, And pen it quick, While my train's on its trolley, Before I'm lost in foolish folley, I've lost my pen, I'm on the brink, Ah, there's my pen, Now where's my ink? |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
This is good, pretty witty. Do like how you put it all together... A case of Alzheimers would be about right for me.... trying to remember where I put everthing.. |
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Debo Member
since 2006-04-18
Posts 321Texas U.S.A. |
such humor in our human behavior of forgetfulness. I really can relate to this little write.  Debo |
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riet Junior Member
since 2006-05-12
Posts 19Australia |
This poem is good to read it is funny. I love it. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
 enjoyedM |
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Silex7 New Member
since 2006-06-15
Posts 4 |
oO~ Fantastic really! i luved the way u began it and end it.. very nice keep writing. |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
My uncle used to say, "If we had bacon we could have bacon and eggs if we had eggs." - Owl |
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Lighthousebob Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725California |
Laughing with you not at you..... Been there. -Bob |
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StevenS Senior Member
since 2005-09-21
Posts 945L. A. (Lower Alabama) |
I hate it when that happens! Enjoyed SilentShadow! :-) |
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SilentShadow Junior Member
since 2006-04-20
Posts 32Fl. U.S.A. |
ThankYou for your comments, I'm not all gloom and broken hearts |
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