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Open Poetry #38

Long time no write, writing today

Thekidfre'
Junior Member

since 2005-11-19

Posts 13

0 posted 2006-06-13 05:12 PM

Sometimes it hurts to smile when the pain is clear
My apparent thoughts that I wish would disappear

This earth I wander with an intent to take care
Our dirt Our water Our place……. its time to share

So many lives are damage for the sake of one
Power can make you blind but also consciously dumb

I see dreams not yet achieved and invisible friends that seem real
In the name of bob Marley “one love” is what the planet needs to feel

The corners of concrete and all instruments of good
We speak for the speechless in an attempted to mend our own livelihoods

I once thought I was a disappointment now I know better
Even broken things of the lord always get put back together

The strength I receive is my fuel to fight
I Fight with my judgment and peaceful insight

I made wishes and wishes have made me
It’s an honor to serve and restore faiths reality

Hopefully soon I’ll get my time and place
But I 've always been a turtle in a rabbit’s race

Jess
Member

since 2006-06-06

Posts 243
Washington

1 posted 2006-06-13 06:12 PM

I love the ending! Welcome aboard

StevenS
Senior Member

since 2005-09-21

Posts 945
L. A. (Lower Alabama)

2 posted 2006-06-13 06:56 PM

The world can always use another good turtle Thekidfre! Welcome! :-)

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

3 posted 2006-06-13 08:38 PM

Welcome!
Enjoyed your first post.
TD

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

4 posted 2006-06-13 11:48 PM

"I made wishes and wishes have made me"

Love that line. Excellent work.

Welcome!

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