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Tom Zart
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0 posted 2006-06-13 08:24 AM


HONEYMOON CRUISE


The gulls have gone long ago
As we sail a peaceful sea.
The skies are blue, soft and kind;
Where else would we wish to be.

Late at night, as we embrace
In front of a reggae band.
You kiss me, and then you whisper,
"I want to be alone with my man."

A little after midnight
We both slip away.
In such of some time
For the games lovers play.

Alone in our cabin,
Your skin is so soft.
I’m just that angel
Who fell from aloft.

After twenty-five years
Of our love has gone;
It's a honeymoon cruise
We find ourselves on.

May the Lord show mercy
On any of those,
Who have never been loved
Or ever been chose.

By Tom Zart
Author of
LOVE WAR AND MORE




© Copyright 2006 Tom Zart - All Rights Reserved
passing shadows
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1 posted 2006-06-13 08:54 AM


excellent!
Lighthousebob
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2 posted 2006-06-13 09:56 PM


Sounds Great!

-Bob

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Beneath the northern stars
3 posted 2006-06-13 10:12 PM


Beautiful.....and it is a wonderful thing to be loved in the way you describe!

~sky

I hope someday you get the chance to live like you were dying....
~Tim McGraw

Tom Zart
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4 posted 2006-06-13 10:58 PM


Thank you,Thank you, many more to come hope you will like them just as well.
Klassy Lassy
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5 posted 2006-06-13 11:12 PM


awwww! wishing you many honeymoons...

  

JamesMichael
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6 posted 2006-06-14 07:15 PM


Nice writing...yes, may the Lord show mercy...James
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