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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 2006-06-13 08:09 AM


Rewrite:


Rings of Time

The tears that you shed today are
The lanterns of tomorrow
These candles left along the way
But show the embers sorrow

The fire of your early youth
The passions of your power
Impacted in a lovers tooth
Filled with sweetness of a flower

Vainglory of Amory
A stepping stone a moments Isle
The story of your glory
Each touch of dream of every wile

All petals of your lives unfold
Vibes of bells that are your chime
Each a single story told
They are the rings you grab of time

Sustain the tear and never fear
It is the reason we are here



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1 posted 2006-06-13 08:13 AM



We are but spirits
on a human journey...

and you are our poet...
leading the way.








Seymour Tabin
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2 posted 2006-06-13 08:26 AM


Sunshine
Thank you love.

passing shadows
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3 posted 2006-06-13 08:53 AM


wow Sy
what an awesome and deep poem this morning!

Seymour Tabin
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4 posted 2006-06-13 09:03 AM


passing,
Thank you dear.

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5 posted 2006-06-13 03:32 PM


Awesome Sy! :-)
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6 posted 2006-06-13 04:02 PM


Seymour~

'A stepping stone a moments Isle'

And with phrases like this
you gather me in mesmerize
as the charm of your words
ring around the pages blue
hue of no one else but you


*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

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Seymour Tabin
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7 posted 2006-06-13 06:02 PM


StevenS
A big thank you my friend.

Marge
You are a doll.

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