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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA 
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From the depths of my sub conscience Raising heaven Raising faith Ridding me of the scars of disappointment And the tears that threaten to surface You echo From the depths of the pain And the years You tell me That I am beautiful Despite the shackles I threw upon my life You rid me of the poisonous lies That I allowed to be plunged deep within my veins You speak my name Ever so gently So softly As I lie awake Raising heaven Raising faith In myself… If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried. |
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Jess Member
since 2006-06-06
Posts 243Washington |
nicely done.. And that line at the bottom is hilarious. Yours? |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Oh, this is lovely! Thankyou for sharing. hugs, Chris Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance. |
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skyshine
since 2002-02-07
Posts 3058Beneath the northern stars |
Isn't it wonderful when someone has that effect? This was beautiful (no pun intended).  ~sky I hope someday you get the chance to live like you were dying.... |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
I feel the vulnerability and the soft touch of an encompassing love in your words. Very easy for me to relate.  ~ Klassy |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
how did I miss this? Glad it got bumped! |
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