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Labyrinth
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Labyrinth |
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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
Step slowly down a hidden corridor one small mis-step, but for Gods' grace, go I. Move carefully, that nothing you disturb evokes such thoughts "perhaps ones' eyes might lie " Remember what defines an area, or leads us down another empty hall. Unknown these paths become a plethora too often lit by just the smallest bulb. Endeavor to divide, not multiply, seek clues that they might show another door. Deduce from this your course is dual or "bi" extending once completely 'round the horn. Sometimes a poem may be just one long hint, completing at the end a labyrinth. |
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skyshine 
since 2002-02-07
Posts 3058Beneath the northern stars |
Poetry is intricate....lots of thoughts in this one! Well done!  ~sky I hope someday you get the chance to live like you were dying.... |
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Jess Member
since 2006-06-06
Posts 243Washington |
nicely done, and i like the ending. Skyshine, my sister loves that song!~~! |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
That movie comes to mind..I know that probably was not your intentions but now I have this image of David Bowie in spandex and a mullet...anyways on a more serious note, I like this..good stuff If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried. |
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