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sonnet 20 |
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themute Member
since 2006-05-08
Posts 469Maryland 
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Traces of memories the sweetest girls Follow me through days I long waited for I smell the summer today it unfurls Now I’ll not see them I’ll live in a bore Will she and he grow stronger connections? Leaving me in the distant memories Will I ne’er prove my humble affections? I should wish for this I’ll be on my knees In my imaginings I’ve not seen this All other wishes have so far come true Yet I have not met in my life such bliss To love a girl with such beauty as you Your beauty is so; it can’t be compared I love you so much my visions impaired [This message has been edited by themute (06-10-2006 03:05 PM).] |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
deep emotion in this write. Well done. |
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Mysteria 
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Enjoyed your sonnet very much - perhaps change "threw" to through  as I "stopped" there, but great emotion as was said.Waste not a second ~ Carpe' Diem |
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