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Open Poetry #38

At Least in Theory

howardtsu
Senior Member

since 2006-01-29

Posts 678

0 posted 2006-06-09 03:16 PM

             i have a grief so similiar

                     to Flyleaf's

because my time with you was too brief

to cure my soul of loneliness

and "I'm So Sick" of showing the world and unhappy face

while knowing that only your kiss

                      can erase

                       my fears

                                     love,

                                     howard

poettothecars
Senior Member

since 2006-02-10

Posts 1093
New Zealand

1 posted 2006-06-12 06:24 PM

since no one has made a comment on your poems, I know the feeling, yet encouragement can do wonders.

never fear to share what you yourself find in value to share with others

a poet who cares

howardtsu
Senior Member

since 2006-01-29

Posts 678

2 posted 2006-06-12 07:23 PM

it doesn't really bother me when people don't reply

i'm only looking for one comment

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