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HopeS
Member Elite

since 2000-12-22

Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

0 posted 2006-06-09 10:16 AM

Being of No Significance

I simply should disappear
Become a nonentity
Being of no significance
It mattered not to me

By becoming non-existent
Tossing myself aside
Being of less importance
Just think that I died

I shall maintain my silence
As I vanish from view
Being in a nowhere place
It had worked for you

I can forget forever existed
When I fall into oblivion
Being my final destination
I shall become no one

In the background I will fade
My shadowy silhouette
Being one cast in isolation
I shall be easy to forget

Hope ©2006
Link to the poem with music and graphic below
http://www.thestarlitecafe.com/poems/101/poem_8338835.html

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

1 posted 2006-06-09 12:19 PM

In the background I will fade
My shadowy silhouette
Being one cast in isolation
I shall be easy to forget

Oh, I beg to differ dear Hope.
Someone as radiant as yourself can never fade away. Nor be forgotten. Nope...not gonna happen. Sending smiling hugs your way. Chris

Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance.
~Carl Sandburg

Will Rhyme
Member

since 2006-05-22

Posts 149

2 posted 2006-06-18 01:59 AM

Loved this one Hope!

Will

skyshine

Member Elite

since 2002-02-07

Posts 3058
Beneath the northern stars

3 posted 2006-06-18 02:56 AM

But words live on.....I don't think a poet ever really dies.

~sky

I hope someday you get the chance to live like you were dying....
~Tim McGraw

Frank W. Torres
Member

since 2006-06-10

Posts 133

4 posted 2006-06-18 08:42 AM

Someone who writes like that might not be easy to forget. Might just be un forgetable! Anyway I enjoyed your poem.

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

5 posted 2006-06-18 11:26 AM

You say it ... it worked for him! Just so, but you know better.

Live Love ... and write, it makes you so highly SIGNIFICANT.

Love and hugs.
Margherita

Patricia
Member Elite

since 2003-04-06

Posts 2160
Missouri

6 posted 2006-06-18 09:47 PM

I know this feeling...having felt this way for so long. I remember, but feel this way no more. You have so much to offer, Hope, so much beauty in your writing...

Patricia

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

7 posted 2006-06-18 10:32 PM

“Being one cast in isolation
I shall be easy to forget”

Sad. And not true for you.
Your very name says it all: HOPE.
We all, will live forever.

JL

ChaoticHazeLight
Member

since 2006-06-13

Posts 71
California, U.S.

8 posted 2006-06-19 04:25 AM

No one can forget what's unknown
They never had a chance to know it to forget
Only those who know you have that chance
and it shows they won't...

- Haze

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