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Kimberly ann Member
since 2006-05-29
Posts 61 |
**this one i wrote on the bus!! And i would really like to read your opinion!!** Scars aren’t always visible. What about the one’s inside out you? Kids have scars that run through out their bodies, thing that they will never forget. Painful and awful things that have come from friends or family. Scars you see are painful but they only hurt for awhile. The ones running inside hurt forever and never stop. They hurt until no end. And it never gives you a break. You may think that you’ve gotta rid of them by not thinking about them, but that’s the problem even if you’re not thinking about them they still hurt and eat away at you weather someone died, someone said something, or someone did something its all gonna hurt. Some will hurt more than others but they still hurt. Your heart feels heavy and when you think about it your sad and in pain. You don’t feel pain physically but mentally. But some scars you can see run deep in you and you feel pain mentally when you see them. It still hurts because they remind you of a bad past. It’s not the best memory. Scars may just be scars but they do really scar you inside forever. |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Yes....the worst scars of all are the ones left inside, where they aren't seen, though their effects may be. Those seem never to fully heal. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Jess Member
since 2006-06-06
Posts 243Washington |
the deepest hurts are indeed the ones we cannot see |
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linkin16 Junior Member
since 2006-05-29
Posts 26Wales,UK |
its the way you see these scars yourself..good read.. |
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Kimberly ann Member
since 2006-05-29
Posts 61 |
thanks you guys i appreciate your comments |
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