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Open Poetry #38

Drain

ecrivan
Member Elite

since 2001-12-10

Posts 3923
my own state

0 posted 2006-06-07 04:36 PM

How one believes
without critical thought
then gets caught
accept face values
blindly
down the drain
refrain asking
out of the question
useless efforts
chronic need
beyond apparent
declared debts
romantic words
interspersed with need
easy to say I love you
thinking pay me always.

delusions
one believes in need
cuts resources
then gets caught
in the drain
chronic need
pay them now
pay them always
while they ask
rich men
in ragged clothes
beg too

peppermint35
Senior Member

since 2000-05-28

Posts 1106
Texas, USA

1 posted 2006-06-07 06:44 PM

As always I am caught up in your work. This is extremely thought-provoking and a wonderful read. Thanks for sharing this!!!

Pepper
"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown

ecrivan
Member Elite

since 2001-12-10

Posts 3923
my own state

2 posted 2006-06-09 09:23 AM

thank you for reading..

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