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PazSqual
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since 2003-11-17
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0 posted 2006-06-07 09:42 AM



The Still of Time

For a moment time has stood still for us
The gap in the distance between us closed
We walked together hand in hand
We held each other in paradise

In the Still of Time
There were little moments
Little Moments I will cherish for a lifetime
The Sunrise, the walk on the beach
The pelicans skimming the ocean waves
The hand picking of the perfect shell
The certain smile, that certain place
That special giggle as my hand traced your face

Thank you babe
For joining me in paradise
Thank you for walking with me
In The Still of Time


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LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
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1 posted 2006-06-07 10:00 AM


this deeply signifies, that no matter how painful a separation or loss of a loved one, fact remains, there was once love, which forever should and will enhance a person's life, if they can let go of the anger, hurt, and realize time changes people, it's not personal, it's just that journeys are not always the same, all of the time, and if there is a way to preserve that, and allow, perhaps we would have less divorce and stronger marriages????

I liked the sound of this very happy tune.

Destiny4u
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since 2006-04-29
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2 posted 2006-06-07 10:16 AM


Thank you so very much for the time we spent together, and the memories we created. They will forever be locked in my heart. I LOVE YOU!
1slick_lady
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since 2000-12-22
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standing on a shadow's lace
3 posted 2006-06-07 10:59 AM


sweet
Jess
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since 2006-06-06
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Washington
4 posted 2006-06-07 11:18 PM


I can feel the sand beneath my feet...
passing shadows
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displaced
5 posted 2006-06-08 01:23 AM


I have to agree with LeeJ
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