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Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2006-06-07 07:41 AM

from the sandfull hands
a blackberry of stones
with the memory of a sea

I lay on my back there
waiting for the gulls to come
and look for food in my eyes

would my breathing disturb them
if they thought I was alive
or not care just the same

if I pretend this desert is an ocean
and this war was but a wind
and that I will return again

to a california sunday morning
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daark

[This message has been edited by Dark Stranger (06-07-2006 09:22 AM).]

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2006-06-07 07:53 AM

Painful memories.

Thank you for the share.

And the giving.

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

2 posted 2006-06-07 08:45 AM

you already have
this was like a smooth fit communicating sets consistent with high spirits with a full moon tune like joy in the early morning, before anyone else stirs...in other wards....you rock and never loose a thing!!!

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

3 posted 2006-06-07 09:21 AM

To bask in the sun of a California Sunday morning, would most assuredly give one a sunnier perspective on life!

Beautifully penned, Dark One!

EA

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

4 posted 2006-06-07 09:49 AM

I always learn something reading you...hugssss you...good to see you back...

And so it those we live with
and should know who elude us
But we can still love them
we can love completely
without complete understanding

Martie

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Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

5 posted 2006-06-07 10:36 AM

"if I pretend this desert is an ocean
and this war was but a wind
and that I will return again

to a california sunday morning"

So poignant, my friend!

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

6 posted 2006-06-07 10:48 AM

most humble thanks to you all, my pipskin tattoos, you bless me with your reviews

Klassy Lassy
Member Elite

since 2005-06-28

Posts 2187
Oregon

7 posted 2006-06-07 11:17 AM

...food for thoughtless gulls, who ride the ever changing wind?...the tides relentless against the visions we cherish, with not even an imprint left in the sand, nor a tear unclaimed by the ocean... stark daark

You do leave imprints on my mind

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