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Kimberly ann
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since 2006-05-29
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0 posted 2006-06-06 11:39 PM



**This is to one of my "old" best friends and partly to my brother who i haven't seen in a long time.**


I’m sorry if I hurt you.  I didn’t mean to.
But you hurt me to the point where I may
never forgive you. You hurt me badly.
I will never forget what you said and the
way you said it. You also said you will
never leave me, but you did.  You promised,
and look where we are now.  
You’ve left me and hurt me.
Was this the plan all
along, to hurt me to no end? I just want
some answers.

You hurt me but I hurt you.
I know I hurt you by your face expression
when I told you about what I did to screw up.
Yet all you said was I will never leave you.
You’re gone now. Its been 3 years now! My
arms are searching for someone to hug and
hold me, my lips need someone to talk to, and
my heart needs to be mended.  You were the
only one who could stop all this pain. But now
you cause this pain.

I hurt you but you hurt me.
I love you but I hate you. I don’t know what to
do now. Nothing I do or say can make this pain
go away. I want to be there with you wherever
you are. Just to let you know how I feel. I keep
in my tears day and night. I know that I’m crying
and bleeding inside without you. But you broke
you promise. But at this point….I just miss you.


© Copyright 2006 Kimberly ann - All Rights Reserved
Jess
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since 2006-06-06
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1 posted 2006-06-06 11:44 PM


I feel your pain. And it comes across well in your poem. Not that pain is good...you know what I mean! I think...
Kimberly ann
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since 2006-05-29
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2 posted 2006-06-06 11:59 PM


yeah i understand what you mean! And thanks!
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